Night bright Halloween
Has given vibrancy,
Methodically nibbled bags
Various candy, munching
Ghostly goblins baring hands.
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nbh hgv, mnb vc,m ggbh
I know, I know, I am too old for headbanging 
But I am a girl and have always been too young or too old for something. Never stopped me before 
Since I got punctuation marks along with letters, I was forced to use them--grrrr 
Fun happy contest. Thanks for holding it.
Written October 29th, 2005
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I always love your work
Very consise but it leaves the vision of those little hands reaching out for the candy. I LOVE it.
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I like this.
Yep I bought three bags, one for me, one for my husband and one for the trick or treaters. -
Back on the farm (Many,Many Years ago) Trick or treating was NOT. hehe
But i licked your poem.. -
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Back on the farm
With less than one house per section, I would have been lucky to Trick or Treat at three houses. I still buy candy but end up eating it myself because nobody comes anymore.
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Thanks for your comments. It was actually something I had never thought of doing and it is a very good exercise in creativity. Wish they had ever thought of this in any of the creative writing classes I ever took in school. Lol, head banging is a sure cure for writers block
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this is really good. really shows halloween. in my opinion. its ok that theres commas. hope you had fun and good luck in the contest! byeseez.
BC 
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