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So ... In love.

I'm in love, So in Love.
No greater love exists, below or above.
The sun shines on just me and mine
Never before have I felt so aligned.
Aligned with stars, moons, far off lands.
Especially when we are holding hands.

I'm in love, so in love.
I don't think I could tell you this enough of enough.
Laughing and joking, being merry all day.
Finally all my problems seem melted away.
Happiness is finally here and mine,
Nothing will ruine it this time.

I'm in love, so in love.
Oh wait... Why does my life suddenly seem so tough.
No this is my hope, my happiness.
Why does it suddently feel like hopelessness.
Suddenly I can't breathe, I feel like i'm falling from the sky.
Too late I realize this is why.
Love, My love, it is now so true.
Real love hurts through and through.
The happiness goes with the pain.
Just as the sun goes with the rain.

Author notes

Everything I write rythmes and usually ends up being cruelly Ironic, honest, or just a little bit sad by the end. It is classical Kristin. Don't take it too much to heart ... after all it is just a poem. =) Have a good day.
Written October 29th, 2005

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  • Acadia
    October 31, 2005
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    Is it really just a poem????? Just wondering. Well, no matter where the inspiration came from, its a wonderful poem. Then again, I wouldn't expect anything less for you. If I haven't told you by the time you read this, remind me to tell you about what Mr. G said about the skull.

    Sam