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not done

i'm a a mess
and i never did clean up very well
like an unloved home i'm falling to shambles
the framework is breaking apart piece by piece
and you'd never know because i keep my shudders well kept
and a smile on my face
i'm fighting the unevitable
that loss of words the writer's block
i'm forgetting who i am
to become someone i would never want to be
this just isn't who i am


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Written October 29th, 2005

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  • Mdeeterz
    November 9, 2005
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    very nice very nice, i like all the metaphors you use (whoa big word there) but yea you're still an awesome writer, even though i havent been on this site in like a year haha. xox mimi