Lets bring back all the words polluted,
On these promises we built,
With the last of our dignity,
Lets rid ourselves of this guilt.
Can you feel the times are changing?
Creeping up like a storm ridden night,
There nothing more to our stories,
It's all here baby in black and white.
Why bother searching for a question,
When the answer's a lead to what will be,
Why bother revealing the future,
When it all ends with you and me.
Author notes
bla bla bla.................... don't ask... it was a random train of thought... I like to think 
Written October 29th, 2005
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aww a jenny comment
greatley missed as is your poetry 
Read my comment on you on my author page 
Thanks for your comment and I can't wait to return the favour
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Fi-ness! That poem was a blast of fresh air! And you rounded it off with typical expertise. It's been too long since I ventured here. I'm gonna have a look through your page for inspiration... I need to get writing again.
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wow... so wonderful... I'm sorry i didn't read this sooner! this is simply... wow... *claps till her hands are red and sore*
<3 love and miss you
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ohhh!! applause, applause and more applause ...truly great write ..XxX
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this is beutifully written
everyone has said what i wanted to say
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great
that waas really good and as rae has already said it is very structerd and we al see u ave put alot of thouhgt and effor in to writting this poem.
lukexx -
Gd thinking fi! yay
cinema and concert buddy! anyways great poem and it was realyl well strucutured. me luvs!
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thanks very much i appreciate your comment
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AWSOME!
very good poem. it actually looked like you had to take a long time to get this one written, even though it was so short. Great flow, and rhyme scheme, and I can't wait to read your next one.
Love
Tim
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