"Shh, Precious. The pain will go away soon..." He stroked her face tenderly as he moved against her.
She closed her eyes tightly, causing tears to slide down. Why was he doing this?
He smiled lovingly down at her as release came, wiping away her tears gently. "Don't fret, Precious. Lay your head down now."
Author notes
Kind of inspired by both my poem, Little Slave, the song that inspired that poem, Pet by A Perfect Circle, and a Snippet Toria done called Hush Now, My Precious.
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Characters don't always need development to make a good story. This would be one example of that. Snippets are 55 words long and drabbled are 100 words long, by the way. That is the difference. You just have to watch count of your words. That's how I do it. Thank you for your comment.
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Oh My Ghee You Can Right In 55 Words =O
o.o So Let Me Get This Right There Is A Difference Between Snippets And Drabble? o.o Ok I Think I Get It And I've Tried Stories Under 100 Words But I Can't Do It Whenever I Write By The Time I Get To Word Number 300 Im Just Finishing Character Building With The Main Person Or Im Ripping Names Off People I Know. -
Snippets are pretty cool though. X3 It's SO romantic how we all inspire each other....It's like...like...we're having Snippet/Drabble sex with each other! 
Ur $0 |-|0+! ♥!
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That is soooo true! I wanted to SLAP my teacher when she told us to write the 55 Word Stories.. But now I actually like 'em, like, a lot. ^ ^; They get pretty easy the more you write 'em; same with drabbles. <3
AND, and, and, and, AND... Yes! This is bee-yew-tea-fool! It's really weird how we keep, like.. Inspiring one another. 
You inspired me to write drabbles.. I inspired you to write snippets.. *Le Sigh.* 
It's so romantic?
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Drabbles will get MUCH easier if you do these. Really.
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ha! Yeah right. I struggle enough with drabbles!
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Believe me, it's actually not that easy at times...Why don't YOU try?
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Aww. This is so sad! And how come you and Tor can write so much in just 55 words, hm? *puts hands on hips* Jealous.
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