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My Forever Friend

Missing image
Silence is Golden
between two friends
they are both willows
together each bends

Always Lean together
into the strong breeze
hold onto each other
each moment you seize

Be each others beacon
when the light disappears
be there shining bright
when the darkness nears

A true friend is beside you
through your hurt and pain
brings smiles and sunshine
as you cry out in the rain

Be their rock that is steady
draw strength from within
grounded in God's love
we let friendship begin


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For my dear forever friend
Written October 29th, 2005

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  • AnoushkaRustagi
    November 5, 2005
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    Hi Sandy, this piece is really good, yes friendship is like a pure gold.but one thing is there, that if friendship is onesided like love then at times it becomes very painful. but this one was really good.. Thanks for sharing.. Anu


  • josh-13
    October 31, 2005
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this is sweet, friendship is Golden. I loved this one, You did ana mazing job writing this one. this is well written and Jost beautiful.


  • musicangel87
    October 30, 2005
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    I really enjoyed this poem! Keep 'em coming!


  • October 30, 2005
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    wow

    wow,it made my daughter and i cry, thank you. This is something i will cherish


  • fabio telegoriano
    October 30, 2005
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    Hey, cool. That sounds like my ex-girls friend...


  • Image and Visions silver member
    October 30, 2005
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    sandy what a nice poem about being friends, as you know trues friendship... but to have based in God in a better step. image and Visions


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    October 30, 2005
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    A very nice poem. I love the line "Be each others beacon
    when the light disappears
    be there shining bright
    when the darkness nears"
    I would like more people like that. People who will lend me a shoulder when I need one. Lovely write.


  • Arsenic-
    October 30, 2005
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    That is such a cool poem. Reminds me of good frinedships...or what they could be. Well done.


  • Shancy Fayre
    October 30, 2005
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    Good job.

    I've never had a friend like this so I can't relate to this poem in reality but, if I was to have a friend, I'd want her or him to be this kind. Good job. Shancy.


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 30, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Dear Beth, that was so sweet of you. You are the dearest AP daughter I could ever ask for. Thank you. You are a blessing and always make me smile. God Bless you. Tank you so much. Take care Sandy AP Mom


  • pulsating
    October 30, 2005
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    this is a nice poem. It's too bad that theres only been one person in my life that has been a true friend to me. You are blessed to have come across more than one.

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 29, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Your comment made me smile. You may not be my best friend but a a wonderful friend. Thank you for that. Sandy


  • beautifulbrat
    October 29, 2005
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    this is a really beautiful piece Mom. I love it. Keep up the good work. God Bless You

  • purefriendship
    October 29, 2005
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    Elegant

    Hi dear Sandy,
    Perfect blend of words on friendship ! Clear lines to cherish the mighty of friend.
    Good friends warm the heart with many blessings.
    Everyone needs friends.
    Luck found me many wonderful friends here in AP and elsewhere.
    Wherever my friends go, I will follow.
    I thank my friends for always being by my side.
    Blessings bloom when my friends are near.
    Hugs of love and friendship are so very wonderful--it keeps us together.
    A friend is a treasure forever.
    Friendship is a big blessing.
    Friendship is a cozy feeling.
    Friendship weathers all storms.
    regards
    subbu (purefriendship)
    Edited on Oct 29, 9:15 because 'spelling mistake'.


  • Forms of Me
    October 29, 2005
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    This is lovely Sandy...I always know I will smile when I read your beautiful work. This is indeed a wonderful write.
    I hope you are well. God Bless you.
    LIZ


  • Autumn Whisper
    October 29, 2005
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    wonderful poem grandma, so sweet, I am glad you have a wonderful friend , keep writing and never stop those beautiful poems coming lol
    best wishes as always
    grandson


  • librarylady
    October 29, 2005
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    Excellent!

    Reading this immediately brought the thought of my best friend to me. I cherish anything that does that. Thank you.


  • NoWayJo
    October 29, 2005
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    really nice piece of writing Sandy. I loved the metaphor of your friendship as the two willow trees. very nicely written and I'm glad I had the chance to read this!

    Jo


  • shubs
    October 29, 2005
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    Very True

    Oh Sandy...thanks so much for the tribute...I am overwhelmed by this plethora of accolades that cascade upon me like an avalanche of sweetness...hahahaha..hey hold it...I may not be the one...Shubs

  • Arcomage
    October 29, 2005
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    oooo Sandy who might this forever friend be? beautiful, as always. I want you to know even if this isn't for me, you are always my forever friend
    Much love...


  • Anna Emkah
    October 29, 2005
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    Beautiful. I can relate to this, I have a friend like that too. Cherish such a friendship, it's so precious. Anna.

  • stargazer7
    October 29, 2005
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    awww! I liked that poem! :-) it was so cute! And the picture just totally added to it... That would be a poem i would give to a friend for a birthday or just as a gift.... Things like that are appreciated greatly...


  • lovelight05
    October 29, 2005
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    great poem, it was really well written!


  • memnoch
    October 29, 2005
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    :-) this was such a nice piece to read! so calm and soothing, relaxing flow of words, the strucutre is so easy too. i love this, it can be one of the best greeting cards out there should you try! nicely written...

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