It just hurts so damn much
I can't take it anymore,
One slit, two slits
I drop to the floor,
I can't stand your voice
It echoes in my head,
Three slits, four slits
Wish I was dead,
I'm screaming and crying
Giving in to the pain,
Five slits, six slits
I'm happy again,
Then my mind rewinds
Memories flow,
Seven slits, eight slits
I've nowhere to go,
Now back to the dark,
Flick the lights, no one's home,
Nine slits, ten slits
Buried under my tombstone.
Author notes
Heya,
This is in no way related to me or mine thoughts for all those who might get worried ^^. I just felt like writing.
Hope you enjoyed the read,
-kat-
Written October 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- Bring on the Pain by skinneza.
300 points, ended October 30, 2005, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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*blank look* wow, i so hope thats not how you feel coz if its not you pulled that off really well. Well, i think i can honestly say thats the first time in my life ive ever been speechless. Great write but please, give some warning next time you do that! I almost fell off my chair till i read the authors comments!
Luv Nat :S
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