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Get well spoon

Now Steven is well liked


He does a wonderful job


I often heard it said


He is the model Mod


 


Now Stevens had an accident


Just the other night


I told him to leave on the training wheels


They help you stay upright


 


There are certain thing that you don’t do


While traveling on the road


And one is argue with a trucker


That’s pulling a heavy load


 


We hope that you’ll feel better


And be back on board real soon


Cos Ogreatbaldone misses you getting his coffee


And I miss that thing you do to his spoon….

Author notes


Written October 28th, 2005

In a list

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    August 18

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    well i am not sure who s is but i know the o bald one and i wil say that smiling rather than frowning! tea but i would suggest, the lowest that goes for a right handed hammer. and that is not me being bitter, just itter, there is no b involved hehehe


  • Raazi
    November 5, 2005
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    Great Poem! I am afraid of saying much here coz I might make some grammatical errors, and I just read your author's page.
    Steven is indeed a wonderful Mod. A great Tribute to him! Well Done!


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    November 3, 2005
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    Steven Morris funny you should mention brownie points when we both know where you put the spoon


  • Steven Morris
    November 3, 2005
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    hehehehehehehehe You're evil!... which means you've earned brownie points lol


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 29, 2005
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    Steven is sick you know you wanna poke those things at everyone!!! I am sorry to hear though about his fall, He is a nice guy, met him on IM a few times, had a problem to fix, and he was very cordial. I am planning on something for him

    Lencio


  • Celticmoon
    October 29, 2005
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    LMAO!!!
    A wonderfully amusing way to begin my day. Your comical writing abilities once again have left me in awe. I am certain Steven will love this piece.

    Good Luck in the contest!

    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • Anna Emkah
    October 29, 2005
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    This is a fun write Paul. Well done. It made me smile! I happen to have met Steven once in an IM conversation (we had a problem to solve about a naked woman figure lol), so it was not really good news to hear about his accident. I hope he will soon be well again. Anna.


  • AnnD Moderators member
    October 29, 2005
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    ROFLMAO.....
    Now if you like what he does with the spoon. then you really WILL be amazed when he gets the whole set of cutlary out.
    A fun read Paul, thankyou so much for entering and we all hope that Steven will be back with us soon and fully recovered.

    Ann


  • heartnsoul
    October 29, 2005
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    You guys are soooooo funny!! Good luck in the contest.. and wishes that this makes him chuckle. But guys have mercy....I can see him laughing so hard it hurts......LOL......
    ~Michelle~

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