As one determines how one feels
underneath the water they reveal the ice
if love is left untrustworthy
love falls to the floor as rice
Author notes
Written October 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- LOVE....Usually Unrequited, but a little hope ain't a bad thing (7 options) by child of grace.
300 points, ended October 30, 2005, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the short poems are always the best. This is one of them. I especially love the last line. "love falls to the floor as rice " It's really lovely. Good luck in the contest,
-Faithful Dreamer -
wow this is such an awesome write stucturely sound flows good nice write all around good job Linda
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