~by Gregg Rowe~
I lie on the water bed
laugh -- create small mattress waves
internal vibrations from giggling;
watch in the ceiling mirror -
a bronze torso:
with sinewy muscles
that bulge upon the skin
surface of his
thighs and arms;
flexing --
his midsection,
as his briefs bulge:
a preening reflection -
of my pompous fantasy -
with an egomanical
high school jock
I fell in love
when he amused me
with his circus tricks
of self fellatio:
unloading his semen
as white as his smile --
I watched in sexual amazement
as the liquid
slipped off his lips --
and as I felt the thrill of it -
vibrated internally
spunked my release
After,
we spoon nude --
upon his leather couch
tune into reality TV
as we hard on
for later
while relaxing on
a special saturday night
Author notes
Written October 28th, 2005
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hmm...I dunno what to say. This is really good. Amusing. Sensual. Loving. It kept me going. :-)
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Very nice! Romantic, and very sexy. Great descriptions, and it had a very nice flow.
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lordofthering. ahhh I anot so sure what to say to this one. it kind of differnt to say the very least. not trying to me or anything, but I didn't understand? image and Visions
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Very descriptive and erotic - a good read indeed.
I did notice a typo - should be "slipped OFF his lips" - damn typos! 
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Sounds as if you are not so much in favour of this fantsy lover as you used to be - this contortionist you were in love with once upon a time. An interesting Saturday night. (slipped off his lips?)
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I sooo love reading you...your thoughts,your soul,your passion,but you know that! More please! Hot men,hot sex and snuggling on a Sat. night...what more could there be?
Deena
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Sensual
This is a very sensual poem, and the short lines make me want to keep reading the next, and the next, and the next (it will not let me get bored with it---a good thing). It's very descriptive, yet not overly graphic.
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