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The Sword

I pulled the sword from The Stone
And let it fall
From my hand to His
I surrender
Willingly and completely
Lord help me to humble myself before You
Let me mark this on hand
“Your enemies are not of flesh and blood”

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Written October 28th, 2005

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  • Ggg g-unit
    October 28, 2005
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    Interesting. I especially like the last two lines