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Bloodlust

Kira let out a soft cry of both surprise and pleasure as Sharazon grabbed her by the waist from behind, allowing his fangs to sink down into the tender flesh of her neck. Her stiffened form gradually relaxed and her hand cupped his cheek as she shuddered, moaning softly.

The drow eventually eased back and watched as the dragoness' lifeblood slowly flowed freely. Intoxicated by the scent, he dipped his tongue into the wound and began to lap up the sweet juice.

Kira moaned softly once more, Soon eased onto the ground and undressed.

Euphoria overtook them as they moved.

Author notes

Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.

Inspired by Toria's EVER SO COOL tanka, Fount...<3
Go read it! allpoetry.com/Poem/1594792
Written October 28th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    They are. aren't they? Thank you, darling.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    This is great Rose! Zon and Kira are such a cool couple and this was great to read.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    Well...what can I say? Zon is a whore. <3

  • October 28, 2005
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    Hm. True. But the last line was still frightening. ._.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    I wouldn't consider this erotica...because if it was...it would have detail. That's why it isn't in the erotica section. As for the fangs...apparantly, Sharazon has fangs...Don't know why, but accoridng to Toria, he does. Probably because he's part dragon.

  • October 28, 2005
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    Eeee... It was fine until the last line. Not that it wasn't well written, because i guess it was by erotica standards.. But.. uh.. yeah. I'm not into stuff like that.
    ..drows have fangs?

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    I could imagine Zon doing this out of the blue. They should SO...like...have sex like that sometime. *nods* And...yes! Blood is always hot! I love being bitten...but drawing blood might be too much pain for me. -_-;

  • Victoria of Aragon
    October 28, 2005
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    Lmfao. Oh yes.. I AM MENTIONED. <3 I feel so.. So.. So even more so loved! ~ Giggle; nod. ~ Yessssss. This is really, uhh, hot! 'Cause.. I'm a freak like that, and Tony and I were talking about.. Stuff like this last night.. Lmfao.. I've tainted him so much.. ~ Le Sigh. ~ Another wonderful drabble, darlinggggg. ♥
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