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Soon

Death whispers in my ear
It's coming near
I can feel the chill
Death is here and you are gone
were suppose to cry and be sad
but i can't remember
how to cry
so i slit my wrist
Cause I'm already dead inside
I joined you
death was near
now it's gone
just like me
just like you
guess the only happy thing left
is that ill see you soon



Author notes

i just got bored i know it suxs but so yeah ......
Written October 28th, 2005

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  • Silent09
    October 31, 2005
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    thax you soo much!!!


  • Silent09
    October 31, 2005
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    what do you mean join soon
    ~Asia~


  • pandora ink
    October 29, 2005
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    This was amazingly good. I felt this way once...


  • LilMissLoser
    October 28, 2005
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    wpw this is really good and it doesnt suck dont put yourself down its amazing and it reminds me of some friends which i will join. its a great write
    ~katie~


  • silenced soul
    October 28, 2005
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    great

    stasier this does not sux i hate that you would even come close to thinking that i loved it so much great job!!!!!!this was excelant!!!!!luv ya lots!~Lissa~


  • Silent09
    October 28, 2005
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    Thax you but i think it really suxs


  • miss midnight
    October 28, 2005
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    i really really like this, great job!

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