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Gone

I didnt see you leave,
     but I felt the (emptiness)
      in my voice,
            when I went to speak
      "I love you".
            Broken down,
         and lonely,
              Ive never missed anything more,
                   than those oh-so-kissable lips.

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Written October 28th, 2005

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  • bluidbabiegirl
    October 31, 2005
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    that was really good boo.... Oh I miss you sooo much...


  • bluidbabiegirl
    October 31, 2005
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    that was really good boo.... Oh I miss you sooo much...


  • mysticlabyrinth
    October 28, 2005
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    awww YAY its so pretty!!!


  • Painted Warrior
    October 28, 2005
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    This is nice. It short but sweet. Showing so much love and emotion with so few words. great job. I love this.


  • LemonDropAngel
    October 28, 2005
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    loved it babe

  • sweetheart4rain
    October 28, 2005
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    thats really perty babe!..i liked it lots..luv ya lots too!.. *kisses*
    -Your babe britt

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