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Dreaming





On your bed, we shall lay
Fading to sleep, after we pray
Curled up close and tight
Locked together til morning light
And in our dreams, we will kiss
Awaking in total bliss

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Written October 28th, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Awwwwww you are just too sweet. Thank you hunny


  • darell
    October 28, 2005
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    Romantic

    Although short, this passionate poem is a real knockout!
    Some may think this to lovey dovey but this is where real romance
    and love reside. There's nothing more fulfilling than snuggling
    up with the one you love after making passionate love.
    Very sweet and meaningful! I loved it.
    Edited on Oct 28, 2:30 p.m. because ''.


  • Nightwish girl
    October 28, 2005
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    This is sooo beautiful. It's short sweet to the point and very emotional! I love it! And I don't think it will ruin your tomboy rep.... We all have a different side that the world never sees!
    Love
    Brandy

  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Tender romantic side to me????
    Shhhhhhhh....don't tell anyone!
    It'll ruin my tomboy rep.....LOL

    Thank you for you every so sweet words my dear

    Hope you have a wonderful day hunny!


    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    Dreamy!

    Awe, just a pleasant read, makes me want to go back to sleep, and I just woke up.lol You have a tender side, very romantic..thanks for this wonderful image this morn..Much love to you and yours!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver

  • SedonaDreams
    October 28, 2005
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    Good

    Short and simple but very nice. It said everything it needed to say. Good write.

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