In the stillness,
birds break the silence
blessing upon blessing
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Written October 28th, 2005
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nice pease of work
a very simple but creative work i would agre that it a hiaku but it works very nicely job well done
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the title fits. this is realy very tranquill and not bogged down by alot of words. this is a haiku. and i personaly dont like haikus. probably because i dont understand them. too restricting. and i cant wrtie them myself. either way a good poem. i personaly like poems with a little more depth but. this is very good
Good Write and God Bless
Pastoral Poet
Ben B. -
short, concise and definitely has a lot of imagery in a few words. sometimes fewer is better.
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This appear to be perfect to me, very well worded an within the ideals of haiku as well. Well done. Best wishes and
s... ~genie~
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Hi,Duana:
Yes hun it is a wonderful haiku and I really liked it sorry I did not specify I new it was a haiku.you are very talented and I really liked this haiku.
mrsfoss -
Actually it's a haiku- or a haiku with the limited understanding and skill I know of what a haiku is.
I am not a good poet. I am only in the past few weeks actually beigining to understand that poetry is a real craft, and takes learned practiced skills to write, and not just emotion. -
Wonderful
Hi,Duana:
A short poem but one that says so much,I really like this and you are a very talented poet,well done.
mrsfoss
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