In the still silence
birds chirp sweet songs, composing a
mood of melody
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Author notes
My sweet husband, said this poem doesn't make sense. He said I can't be talking about silence in one line and birds chirping 'in the silence'. I am like why not? I want to convey a beautiful still morning when the birds suddenly break into the silence, and bless us.
Obviously it doesn't convey this, so any helpful feedback is welcome!
Written October 28th, 2005
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Serene
That was serene. I liked the word placement, it added to the feel of the poem very well.
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