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On Patience

One does not practice patience
When everything goes his way.
One gets better with practice
When his world is in disarray.

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Written October 27th, 2005

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  • CountryCousin
    June 27, 2006
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    Excellent point.

    Oh I like this one it so short and to the point but makes such a valid point.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 31, 2005
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    Oh, my lord, if this isn't the truth!!!!!!!!!!!
    Well done! Youa re wise!


  • Beret55 silver member
    October 30, 2005
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    Very true.. I just don't have much of it..


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    October 30, 2005
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    Thanks for taking the time to comment. Lol, I always find myself very patient when I am getting what I want


  • chanterai
    October 28, 2005
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    Amazing!

    AMEN! This is completely, 100% true. Patience is best acquired in adverse conditions. This is wonderful. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck! =)


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    October 28, 2005
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    Lol, all this from that scary place I call my mind

  • heart on sleeve
    October 28, 2005
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    you are goodxx

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