In
every
twist
and curl
you gently
weave a
warm
feeling
over my
entire body
with your mere
fingers;
I
accrue
great repose
when you
play
with my
hair.
Author notes
I LOVE to have people play with my hair- it's one of the most relaxing sensations to me. I could let someone play with my hair for hours, and never be satisfied!
Written October 27th, 2005
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A contest entry
- WALTZ WAVE [form contest] by Samplette.
300 points, ended November 1, 2005, 9 entries
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This has a lovely tranquil quality to it. A piece that seems too have streached you as an author... no rhyming! But it is a wonderfully crafted moment of time!
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Me too!!!! When someone plays with my hair, I just go off to lala land. I'm glad I'm not the only one, lol. (same thing with my feet-funny the two extremes-head/feet)
I liked how you held out to the end to reveal what you were writing about-gave it a little twist. Best wishes in the contest~vj -
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A very soothing write. Sometimes playing with my hair is soothing, but there are times it is aggrivating...guess it depends on the mood..lol Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
sam
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