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Hunter

God’s treetops
Leaves fill the meadow
Fresh sunrise dew
Morning’s new hunter immerges
Drinking in the sky
Hungry spirit chortles
Tread by the river
From here sounds rustle
Grow near
Delicious fear strikes
Hunter’s desire breeds

…Hunt for peace and love

Author notes

a small series I have just come up with.
Written October 27th, 2005

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  • Beautiful Nothing
    December 19, 2005
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    wow i love how you get to the point in your work. You dont have useless words in there you just get to the point pf the poem. Great job.
    Love,
    Auntie


  • QueenT
    November 4, 2005
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    i loved the image you painted here! Very beautful

    Thanks for the comment on my poem and Im sorry I dont have time to leave a more detailed comment, I am in a rush, thanks again QueenT