The pain that I feel is excruciating
I can't move, my whole body is aching
My insides feel like it's ripped apart
Oh let's not talk about the pain in my heart
The pain that I feel is now numb
The tears in my eyes fell quickly to the ground
Now I can't breathe, I'm hyperventilating
This was the case of rape, no mistaking
The innocence of an eight year old is now taken
Imagine a thirty two year old,holding down an eight year
old body
Shoving his t-shirt in her mouth so she won't yell out for
nobody
This was the case of a thirty two year old
Pleasuring himself with the flesh of an eight year old young
soul
Lurking around my family night and day
He was my predator I was his young prey
I punched and I kicked but his grip got stronger
I can't belive this, he was like my father's brother
Pushing his manhood inside of me
I felt pain and blood was rushing from inside of me
Now I have to live with this trauma
It's eating me up as I get older
When I close my eyes to sleep at night
I wake up with nightmares screaming in fright
That is when I realize, this is something I have to live with
for life
Author notes
this is something i wish no little girl have to go through
Written October 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- Death by tears? or.. Death by love? by Underneath my skin.
300 points, ended September 8, 2006, 18 entries
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such a sad write... i am so sorry for what you had to endure but poetry always helps me get though times like those.....
alittle to graphic for me... i know thats probably what happened to the letter but the way it was worded gave me images in my head that made me feel sick...
i am so sorry that you were put through such a thing....
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sadness
such a sad story,
alot of pain felt throughout your write,
innocece takin at such a young age,at any age is just so painful.
alot of imagery in this,really pulls the reader in,i cried all through this story,very painful memories for me as well,raped 3 times in my life,I can really feel your pain and angiush in your write,
my heart goes out to you.I to was raped by an uncle at 8yrs old.something I will never forget,he died a while ago,killed himself had to go to his furneral to make sure he was really dead,but doesn't help take away the pain and memories at all.
I'm so sorry this happen to you.
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oh my this is so sad so sorry
It reminded me of my dad
any way youur poem was fantatsic good luck
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OMGGG im so sorry.. thats terrible hunny. im so glad your alright though.
thank you so very much for entering!
this is such a good poem and blunt as well.
good luck!
.lucinda.
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Great Emotion
I am sorry if this really happened and this is a great write!
I applaud you because your pain is conveyed clearly..
KAY
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wow, this is great. i actually felt like the person in the poem. and i know what that is like as well. great job.
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Very personal
Nice poem! It was very deep and persoanl. I like how much emotion you put in there. I am so sorry that you have to go through this, but its good that you are getting yyou emottions down on paper. Keeep writing poetry and check out some of mine! :-) -
wow! god bless your soul i was raped by my unkle too when i was about 8 years old and your right we do have to live with it our whole life and i was so lost because of this and i believe if this didn't happen to me i wouldn't be as strong as i am today
i wish this pain on no body either it is so unfortiate but now i want to be a lawyer because of it so i can but the men like this behind bars for life i think that men shouldn't get just 7-8 years i think it should be charged as murder because almost every one i talk to says they are dieng inside if they arn't already dead!! well your words were very powerful and heartfelt sorry you had to go thru this and like i said be-4 god bless you soul hope one day you and not forget about it but not let it haunt you you have great talent and it is showcased well in this peice
love always
Victoria ~aKa~ Te Te
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...I'm very sorry you had such ahorable experiance and at such an innocent age...I can see tallent in the way you express your pain...thanx for ur comment earlier.
I know I'm a bad speller...lol.
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It's sad when I can say I know how you feel...I feel your pain. Awesome write hun... Much Love.
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I know you must get this from everyone that reads this but I am sorry about what happened.It made me a little frightened to imagine that people would do this and that you have to live with this every day of your life.I did love the way you wrote the poem and the way you faced your fear to write it. You are brave and once again I am sorry for what happened to you.
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fantastic and so sad
This poem is great but at the same time so heartbreaking. I know you have probably heard this way too much but I'm so sorry that this happened to you. It's good that you have a boyfriend to comfort you. If you ever need anything just contact me. Great write, keep it up!
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thank u retard ur comment is greatly appreciated
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thank so much fallenxangel i appreciate it
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thank u so much for reading and understanding what i went through and is still going through because of this i have to attend several couseling sessions with the support of my boyfriend
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sighs This is so terrible..and I agree nobody should have to go through this. It leaves a huge impact on you forever, and it's impossible to forget. People always say "that can't happen to me"..turns out it could. Amazing job with describing the trauma, and aftermath of this..glad to see some people can talk about it. Awesome job, and keep up the good work.
~Fallen
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excellent
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it's beautiful written but... about thing i have always feared. i can't understand how men can do something like that. i'm so sorry about you.
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