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Arctic Eyes

Arms clasped tightly around her waist; enough to show her value, even though his mask fooled her at times. How tightly he held her close showed her things most were too ignorant to see, which was the way he wanted it. His secrets were only for her to see.

Kira saw warmth in Sharazon's arctic eyes.

Author notes

Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.

Woo! *dancedance* I am now ALMOST as cool as Tooooriaaa! I've written my FIRST 55 word story! NOW...Now...I have to write...ANOTHER one! So THEN...then I can BE as COOL as Toria!
Written October 27th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 12

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    It's weird how icy eyes can be so emotionless without even trying. It's putting emotion IN them that actually takes effort. Never really got why that is. Odd...
  • The imagry in this is beautiful. It expresses a lot despite the word count. Wonderful job.


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 27, 2005
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    No, no, no, no, NO...Only about EIGHT!!! AND...you inspire me a lot! Look at all the Zon writes! See? SEE!? You inspired me A WHOLE LOT! *nods*

  • Victoria of Aragon
    October 27, 2005
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    Omfgs! For once.. I have INSPIRED someone!? Rather than being the one INSPIRED!? ~ Tear. ~ I feel so loved and all that jazz.

    Lmfao. Yes. I love commenting on stuff with you.. Because.. We're both.. So crazy.. It alwys makes me giggle. Ahhh... Yes.

    YOU ARE NOW ALMOST AS COOL AS ME! <3 .. But I still have to write, like, seventy BILLION Drabbles to be as cool as you.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 27, 2005
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    Thank you, darling.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 27, 2005
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    This is great Rose! 55 words?! Wow! And your author's comment is definitely like Opaque's. Great write.
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