I feel so empty
With nowhere to go
Why did this happen
It's killing me slow
We were supposed to get married
At least that's what you said
Was it really a lie
When we laid together in bed
I don't understand what I did
To make you feel this way
All I have done is cried and cried
Knowing that you would not stay
I thought I was your everything
Or was that a lie to
Also when you whispered
The words I love you
I can't believe this is happening
Why are you doing this to me
I took you in off the streets
And this is how you repay me
You tore my heart to pieces
And you don't even care
You let that bitch you call a girlfriend
Just laugh and stare
I knew this was going to happen
When she moved back in that day
You told me you would never cheat on me
And told me it would all be okay
I believed you....
And look where I am now....
Alone and empty.....
Author notes
Written October 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- Slam poetry by XDoriXdaXlez.
300 points, ended November 1, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow very deep my friend, i could feel your pain pour of the page as i read every word of this, im so sorry to hear this and im here for you my friend
hugz and kisses
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wow, such a sad poem, very heartfelt and heart breaking! i really hope you managed to get over this guy, who ever he is, because obviously he is not worth all the sadness. best of luck, and i hope i never made anyone feel the way you do cuz that's just too awful!!!
Oh, also a small note, on line 14 i think you meant 'too' instead of 'to'
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Very sad and heartfelt. The intensity bleeds through the screen (though that's helped both by your color scheme and the background). Thank you for sharing it.
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amazing
i have been heart-broken coz a boyfriend cheated and the feelings you describe in this poem are so true, amazing poem and remember he not worth one tear down your cheek!!
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Hey babe..this is a really heartfelt poem..I love it..You really let your emotions out on this one. Stay strong and Write on..everything will be okay..just don't let it bring you down.
twizted bizkit
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