The sound of metal rang out in an echo before a deadly silence took over. A sword with fading green aura lain embedded in the ground a few feet away. All that was heard was a faint sound of panting.
Kira glared up silently into her brother's face, pulling her sword out of the bark, an inch away from Darrin's neck. A growl rumbled within her throat before she spoke. The others were still with shock. "If you EVER try to kill Sharazon again, I WILL kill you. DON'T push me."
She turned to Sharazon and smiled. "I'm sorry I disobeyed."
Author notes
Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.
Darrin is a shared copyright between myself and DDsithstriker.
You'll find that I write a lot about these characters. I hope it doesn't get dull.
Written October 27th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Drabbles IV by Elrenia.
300 points, ended November 17, 2005, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Haha...noice. So was she not supposed to jump in, or what? Kind of an intriguing short short. Longer story that goes with this?
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She wasn't allowed to talk until Shar said she was, and she disobeyed.
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Aha...um...I've never read your writing, so I can't really comment on that. I have no idea what brought to reading my writing, but...thank you for the comments anyway. Just be warned that if you give me shit like you have to Toria in the past, I will be the biggest bitch you've ever met.
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Ok So I Never Liked You...Sadly Given That You Outrank Me In Writing o o; Anywayz I Find This Kewl And Probably Better Than The Two Storys I Am Proud Of To Shame *Shrugged* I Wub You Know =( <3
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Yeeeah...and he caused Kira to disobey her Maaaasterrrr! BUT...she, like, was protecting him and stuff....so all is good! 
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Lmfao. Omfgs. I decided to read ALL your new stuff, too! So fear me and my random comments of DEH-HEWM! ~ Evil giggle. ~ Yessss.. Poor Darrin.. Trying to spoil our fun.. ~ Mumble. ~
Ah, well. Another lovely drabble that I shall have to try and, like, write another of.. So I can be coooool like youuuuu. <3
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When it happens in FR, Yuna, you'll know.
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I changed the font color so it would be easier to read. Thank you for your comment.
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Oooo! Oh my...!
Poor Darrin! That must have shocked him one! Good luck in the contest. Oo! Oo! Oo! I MUST find out what happens afterwards.
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Nice, and succinct. The red on black is hard to read, but otherwise a nice little piece. Well wishes in the contest.
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