Woman is not what she wears,
neither a color of her eyes,
woman is love what she shares
without any fears and costly lies.
Woman is not only a body shapes,
neither habitual pattern of her own,
she is a place you choose to escape
to rest your heart and your bones.
Woman could be any color you need,
green, brown, black or even blue,
if she's here when you bleed
always the same and always new.
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All credits for picture goes to Jonathon Earl Bowser -
(C)The Goddess Art - Thank you Jonathon for your personal permission.
www.jonathonart.com/intro.html
Written October 27th, 2005
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Thank you Sunchild. I am glad you like it.
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Great job on this poem! You've really got some deep thoughts going here. I loved the line "Woman is not what she wears...woman is love that she shares." That's just so awesome! Good luck on the contest!
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Thank you very much tambolparaDiyos for your time to read my poetry and for nice and precious comment.
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gosh, this contest is gonna be hard to judge. geez. your poem is beautiful. and the pic, just amazing. i loved the third stanza:
"Woman could be any color you need,
green, brown, black or even blue,
if she's here when you're to bleed
always the same and always new."
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Thank you Lady. I knew that you belongs to Pixieland too.
~Sonja~ -
this is beautiful. I love it my dear. Thank you for inviting me to your pixie world by the way.
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Thank you Dare2Dream
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Wow this one was a feel-good poem!! (for women anyway!) THanks for entering my contest!
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Thanks DreamingMoon for your kind comment.
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judged excellent- Great job I love it, i think shapes should be shape tho. Sorry typo
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Thank you for reading and this very precious comment.
Yes, I agree with you Ostara, but sometimes it is very hard to talk this way - my way - because some readers are scared of wiccan sayings. Harmony is most important, and very hard to subsist. Ying and yand are not enough close.
~Sonja~
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this was gorgeous!!
Wonderful picture with a wonderful poem.. This really reminded me somehow of some wiccan sayings. The female power on this planet is really all the things you discribed, and you did that in such a personal, realistic way! I think we should all be more aware of the woman, that force in our lives, not only women themselves, but men too, so all could find a bit more harmony within themselves.
Wonderful piece! Love you, Ostara
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Thank you Linda to stop by to read my poetry. All my poems come from my heart, even than when they are writen for contest, of course if my muse allows me.
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this is a lovely self explainatory poem..very nice to read the poem and see the picture with it.. flowed so well together..thank you so much for sharing it with us..Linda
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Thank you Massy for your comment and such a nice words. Some leaves will be replaced with the new...with no new buds...
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Afarin
The equation of love is not applicable to any fixed rules of the world.It kneel down the logic,breaks the lines and captivates hearts!
Talking about feelings sounds too hard for me but you always can do that.It’s so good.I enjoy it.
Golden days are waiting for you..so forget the coldness of this winter.Snow will melt away soon and green spring will come with the buds of success.
Be vernal....like a vernal leaf.
~Massy~
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That's only me and my vision of life Joe. Thank you for your comment, kind words and applause.
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sonja, you speak here in a language modern women soemtimes forget or refuse to use, the language of love. great entry, my friend.
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Thank you Nicollete for this wonderful comment. This contest was a great challenge, and I have done what was the best on my mind and my feelings.
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Wonderful poem, Sonja - a lovely collage of a woman in all her shapes, colours, scents, roles, loves, tears and joys! This was such a joy to read. You've really captured the essence of a woman!! Good for you, woman!!
~ Nicolette
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Thank you sunrising. I appreciate your comment very much.
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Can't imagine a better picture of all women!
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Thank you Touchof1der for your great review and so nice comment. It is very precious to me. Also, thank you for good wishes.
~Sonja~ -
Thank you Angel for your good wishes and kind comment. I am glad you like it.
~Sonja~ -
I like the way you brought out all the multi facets of a woman's character and personality in this piece. It is so true that we are more than just the shell in which we inhabit. You did a splendid job here. You words have great depth and meaning. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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wonderful write, and the picture in this just like was wow! Thanks for sharing, goodluck in the contest.
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Yes, that was my intention - to show that we are much more than flash in the shape. Or, sometimes, only a number.
~Sonja~ -
A sweet write that shows a woman is more then mere flesh and bone. I am happy to have read this today.
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Thanks Abigail for your rewiev and so nice comment and applause.
This comment is one of those very precious.
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beautiful words and one i applaud as to many take women for granted and see only their form and those who beauty posses are not wanted for their intelligent mind or talk well this is amazing with a great flow with the deservedly great description of a beautiful creature well done lol abigailxx
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Thank you sweetpoetess.
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This is so beautiful. The picture goes perfectly with this poem. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!
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Thank you Sandi for this very nice comment. I am not sure about my English, but I am doing the best I can. I am glad that you like it.
Thank you for your good wishes.
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Sonja, you have penned a marvelous tribute to Women in general. No matter the shape, color, size, we await the ones we love with open arms, forever changing to fit their needs.
Your english is improving in leaps and bounds, wonderfully done!
Good luck in the contest it's for!
blesings, Sandi
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Thank you James. Now you are AP memeber also. Welcome. I hope you will post your best here. Call me soon. How's little Joss and twins?
You can find "rose" in Help file.
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Your poetry is great, and your English in great progress. I will read more soon. Thank you for all your support dear friend.
How to make a smile and rose?
Hmm - Rose for you -
Your poetry admirer.
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Thank you Stolen for this great and outstanding comment. Now we will see the "other side" oppinion.
~Sonja~
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*gives you a standing ovation* LOVE IT. thank YOU, finally some one has written a poem about this sort of thing.
very nice write, so truthful. I concradulate you on this.
CONGRATULATIONS!
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Thank you Katie for your nice comment, great rewiev and applause. Also, thanks for your best wishes.
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Yes jazzy...this is the truth. I am glad that you like my verses. Thank you for your sweet comment.
~Sonja~ -
You have penned your sentiments so well here Sonja, it's not the color of her eyes or what she wears that makes a woman Sonja, as you rightly say, tis the love that is in her heart that makes her a true woman, love of family, love of husband/partner, love of life etc.. Best Wishes for the Contest
~Katie~
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this is really a truth... nice description and really trueeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but over all this is a nice poem!
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