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Tonight I Write the Saddest Lines

You can take your pictures anywhere
and you could send them along with me
you could photograph the insides
of the things you wish you
could be
You can kick a rock anywhere
as long as you move your feet
but rest assured somewhere anywhere
will turn back into you and me

You can see the stars anywhere
anywhere you can open your eyes
You can dance anywhere
without any good times
and you could say so softly anything
to make time pass us by
but rest assured anywhere is nothing
without you and me tonight

Yeah you can walk anywhere your feet
happen to go
and you cans say all the words inside yourself
but I would never know
and you can say my name anywhere
anytime
but it wouldn’t bring me any closer
to where you are

so any star anywhere in the sky
that calls you when your walking
to any destination on
another night
reply to it with anything at all
but on this night they’re all mine
as I write to you any line
asking any part of you
to come back home

Author notes

I Love You I miss You

Title a Pablo Neruda Reference
Written October 26th, 2005

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