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Break Up

Okay, now I'm a bit/ch
but for six months you loved me
you cared for me like no one else
You put nothing above me
you were there for me
i was there for you
we always had fun together
it was too good to be true
but then the "games" started
and i wasn't taking you sh/it
So after 6 months of our relationship
i had to call it quits
along with the break up
came the rumors and the lies
you acted like you didn't know me
did you think that would make me cry?
But naw, I ain't trippin
It's impossible to make me frown
My spirits are rising higher and higher
While your the one thats getting knocked down

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Written October 26th, 2005

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  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    December 22, 2005
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    way2goTaurus! :)

    that is too cool. six months and you were fine. wow... its awesome that you are such a high-spirited person. i wish i could have a type of trait like that, it must not runin my genes. thats just an uplifting poem... it inspires me.


  • Rakastaa
    October 26, 2005
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    awesome.... glad you are doing fine after the break up!! its good that you are not letting him to pull you down! i like this
    Andrea