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Always In My Heart

"Always On My Mind"
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Maybe my love for you, I showed in different ways
Maybe I missed the mark baby, all my live long days
Please know my dear, you're number one
And I wish we never fell apart


You were always in my heart,
You were always in my heart.


Maybe I should of held you, longer from the start
And I should have told you, you're the angel of my heart
If ever I made you feel, lonely in any way
I apoligize for my part


You were always in my heart, 
You were always in my heart,


I still, I still believe in us, tell me our love's alive
Please give me, give me please one more chance to satisfy
If ever I made you feel, lonely in any way
I apoligize, let us mend each broken part


You were always in my heart,
You were always in my heart. 

Author notes

A take from Elvis Presley's Song, "ALWAYS ON MY MIND"
Thanks for reading me, much love to all always! -Timothy
Written October 26th, 2005

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  • Angelflower
    February 22

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    aww this was really lovely!! I love Elvis!! and you made yourself a lil song too .. you really did a wonderful job with this write.. I love the repetitive parts in this thanks much for sharing!!!

    Angel


  • peaceinmind26
    January 30, 2006
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    Lovely!!!

    Love what you've done with this classic, beautiful, and I'm sure Elvis would be proud!!!

    I still, I still believe in us, tell me our love's alive
    Please give me, give me please one more chance to satisfy
    If ever I made you feel, lonely in any way
    I apoligize, let us mend each broken part



    You were always in my heart,
    You were always in my heart.


    -sigh-

    -Me~


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    November 6, 2005
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    Divine Tribute!

    Dearest Timothy and family,
    My Beloved Friend you’ve made magic mend
    I love your romantic enchanting love song

    Baby Blue I love Elvis
    The King of Rock n Roll
    His life and love story
    Rocks my heart and soul

    Timothy you Rock
    With your socks off
    You ROCK
    The image and the placement of the words
    On the page is extraordinary
    A fine tribute to the King of Rock N Roll

    I can hear Elvis singing this song of love
    As you sing from your heart up above
    I love you baby blue and all you do
    I’m taking the time to sing I love you

    I wish I could have told you
    How much I love and adore you
    Baby Blue, you’re always on my mind
    Seems even in our hectic busy lives we found time
    Sending smiles our hearts and a loving valentine

    Love knows naught a time frame
    In love and loving we’re all the same
    I love your song; I love all the little things you do
    Baby Blue the love you make is up to you

    When this life is over
    And the angels up above
    Greet me with a four-leaf clover
    And they ask me whom did I love

    This is the line I will sing baby blue
    I love you you’re always in my heart.
    I love you darling true love never parts
    You’re always in my heart
    .
    You’re song mega divine
    A masterful presentation
    I can feel his vibrations
    A gem a masterpiece.

    I’m happy to tell you this song
    And you is magic loving divine
    Your heaven in my mind
    Your loving is divine.


  • queenie
    October 30, 2005
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    well the king would have to share the spot light with you were he alive today.you rock,dude,you rock.there is no end to the ways you demonstrate all that love in your heart.my precious angel,the world could use more of you.


  • sweetgurl
    October 29, 2005
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    This is beautiful..../f/f/f/f/f...I really enjoyed reading this. Best wishes in the contest! God Bless and take care!

    ~Katie


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    October 28, 2005
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    Another sweet Elvis dedication my friend. This is so sweet. Would make any woman swoon no doubt. Best of luck.

    Blessed be

    ~~Serenity~~
    Billie Jean


  • maryannde gold member
    October 27, 2005
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    Another lovely tribute to your favorite, The King.
    I very much enjoy your take on one of my favorite song. I can still hear YOUR voice in my head.

    Very well done hon!
    Mary Ann


  • Celticmoon
    October 27, 2005
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    The King seems to be very much alive inside of you. A wonderfully touching and emotional write. As always your words so tender and sweet are so clearly filled with emotion. Your heart has sung yet another turn and a beautiful one at that.

    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • poeticpieces
    October 27, 2005
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    Rock & Roll Baby, Yeah!

    Awe, dad, this is so sweet, I love the lyrical flow to this...you give much thought and heart into the pieces you pen within...and what a background, almost like we can see him in concert now, heehee! Sweet, cool, awesome, I love it, thanks for sharing you!

    -lil Tim


  • poetryrocksmysox
    October 27, 2005
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    Divine!

    A truly wonderful, loving tribute to the KING OF ROCK & ROLL!
    You have weaved a master piece through your eyes of love!
    This is beautiful, pen on in your beautiful songs of love!

    prms~~

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    Wonderful - as usually Timothy! Your words make me smile tonight, I thank you for that!

    Melissa


  • Eyes Of Rain
    October 26, 2005
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    Timothy,
    What a lovely job you've done here! Great job! Thanks for reading and commenting on mine as well. Best of luck in the contest poetic one.

    ~Sherry~


  • magicalprincess
    October 26, 2005
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    Lovely!

    Awe, I wish Elvis still lived, I would of loved a chance to get to know him better. But through his love songs and rock n' roll, I think I have a pretty good idea he's a sweet, loving man!

    An awesome write!
    -Kayla


  • Sunkissedrose
    October 26, 2005
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    Smiles, Elvis lives baby . This was great, this is one of my fave songs by Elvis. You did it justice by taking it and making it your own.
    ~Carrie


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    Thanks, I appreciate your kind words, and yes, seems everyone still loves the KING! Wish you well too my poetic friend!!!

    -Timothy


  • Sonja
    October 26, 2005
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    Nice verses Timothy. It looks like Elvis has the best rating here...Also, nice used background. Bravo. Good luck in contest.
    ~Sonja~

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