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Mine Alone

Lips locked in fiery passion, tongues swirling in a dance of lust, they moved in unison together. It'd been so long since their limbs entwined in such ways, yet they remembered every crevice; every secret.

Kira's cries rang out in echoes through the night; their flesh blanketed only by darkness. They were heard and not seen.

Sharazon's sounds were low and only heard by his precious possession. That was enough for them both.

Finally collapsed, he whispered sweet nothings into her ear, making her the most precious to his heart. The one love he feared losing the most. "Mine alone."

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Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.
Written October 26th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 12

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    Ya know, in a weird way I think everybody craves that sort of relationship. They wanted to be someone's everything, theirs and theirs alone. Never really works out that way, at least not for long. *ponders*

    Ah well...nicely done as always.


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    November 18, 2005
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    It's quite alright. I just found it strange that you hadn't commented on this one, but you had all of the others. I'm glad though that you enjoyed this write.

  • Elrenia
    November 18, 2005
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    Oops, I found it. Sorry about that. I did read this earlier. It is very nice and fills in well. Since I know a bit more, now, about this story, this makes wonderful sense. This is truly amazing and deserves an HM, also. Sorry I lost it in the confusion of judging.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    Zon won't die! That would, like, KILL Kira! And if Darrin has ANY sense at ALL...then...he WON'T kill Sharazon! Aylimenn will stop him!!!!

    But...yes...I'm glad you liked it darling. Annnnd...Well...I'm just...used...to...writing them? Yeah. I'll go with that!

    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!

  • Victoria of Aragon
    October 26, 2005
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    ... Lmfao. Zon's gonna die. ; ; ~ Le Sigh. ~ Justin ruins all my dramatical whore fun.

    BUT. Yes. This is another very lovely Drabble thinger, Rose. ♥ I really don't know HOW you can just, like, write them so quickly and so easily.. ~ Whine. ~ Ah, well. I'm NOW going to go try and find MINE that I wrote! ... I think I scapped it, and will have to start all over again.. But I know the jist of it.. Lmao.

    Best of luck aaaaaaaaaaagggggggggggaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn. ♥ ♥ ♥ ... ♥ !

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    I can imagine. Of course, you're underestimating Sharazon, you know...and if Darrin killed Sharazon, Kira would likely go into a fit of rage...and that might not be too pretty, if you get what I mean. I plan on Darrin freaking out once I bring him back in. I haven't gotten to that yet. I'm waiting till a little later. By the time you see this though, since I don't know when next you'll be online, he might already be in FR again. Thank you for commenting
    Edited on Oct 26, 12:21 because ''.
  • DDsithstriker
    October 26, 2005
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    Short sweet, but if Darrin found out it would surely be the end of Sharazon, no questions asked. Though still its really good, as long as I'm not looking through my character's eyes.

    ~Justin~

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