Music lover
Flying despite broken wings
Loving despite a broken heart
Healed by a loving Savior
Who made her whole again.
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Eh i got bored so i decided to add a poem. 
YAAAAY now you can ALL get to know me!!!
Written October 26th, 2005
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Hey wow, I love you poem. Short and sweet as they say!!
lol sweet job girl!!!!
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This is not at all an offshoot of boredom,to me it reads a piece by a master or rather a masterpiece and a terse verse but which is so powerpacked with your attributes..I just loved all the lines..each one a poem by itself..Shubs -
well like i said i was bored so i decided to write a poem and bored poetry isn't always the best. i know what you mean in that what is described isn't really all of who i am... i see no lines mentioning "loud" or "hyper" or "fun-lover" or "stubborn" or all that good stuff... it's just a short little poem about a little bit of me. a part of who i am.
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*blinks* I'm sorry I have to say this..but I don't think it's as great as your other poems...I don't like it that much, of course I"m in a negative mood right now.
The ending is superb though.
I think you can describe yourself better.
Edited on Oct 26, 6:36 p.m. because ''. -
Thanks!
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WOW!!! That is amazing. That is such a great poem. Truly describing you in just a few words. Great, awesome, fantastic job! That is beautiful... truly beautiful. Keep up the great work!
--Tim
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