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Serendipity

My kitchen window
speaks of rust and
hard to budge
hinges.

When I finally cracked it open
a little,
I saw a blue lark sitting
demurely on an old
tree stump, and then
flying away.

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Written October 26th, 2005

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  • anastazsia
    October 30, 2005
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    Thank you... (:


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    October 29, 2005
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    You probably don't know this but I'm a huge lover of birds. The image of the little lark sitting and then flying away was a sight to behold. You described it very well. Nice job on this lovely kitchen window view of you. Thank you for entering and good luck

    ~Lyrical