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Passion's Dance Gypsy Spanish Flamenco

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Passion pride and prejudice,
shining through in your dress.
Flaming lips and Raven haired,
clipping heels clatter pair.

Movements smooth silent words,
so much passion steely nerves.
Castanets clack in rhythm,
ruffles swirl in cataclysm.

Heavy heated passions dance,
perfect timed Spanish trance.
Danced in pairs heels and toes,
romantic artful Flamenco.

  ~~~Suseann~~~

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Written October 25th, 2005

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  • Jonathan ROBIN
    February 4, 2007
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    Dancing

    prancing glancing... backing and advancing entrancing subject for a moving verse


  • williamstown silver member
    September 8, 2006
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    I can hear the tattoo of clicking heels in this, then the pregnany pauses before the beat resumes, tentative at first before reaching rapid climax. Beautifully evocative.

  • montez gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    Good rhyme and rhythm, and a great rhyme with rhyme itself, and cataclysm.
    Well deserving of an applause.
    You've caught the atmosphere with this descriptive write.
    Well done.
    R


  • teenhotness05
    October 27, 2005
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    wow vivid! great write will be checking out others.
    cya x x x jen x x x


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 27, 2005
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    '...Movements smooth silent words, so much passion steely nerves. Castanets clack in rhythm, ruffles swirl in cataclysm.' Ohhh, suse...this is glorious, my Friend...I could hear Montoya's guitar playing as she swirled...beautifully penned, Lady... Wander


  • wbiro gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    now this piece reveals you have peered deep into the psyche of a flamenco dancer before today, suseann! My guess- a childhood passion!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    stunning dance good luck..Linda


  • Kukana gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    Lovely... and picture is amazing... great write Suseann!

    S~


  • The MisSin Truth
    October 25, 2005
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    beautiful work

    ...bravo!!!!
    im sorry to use that word its kinda booshie i know, but i really liked this poem. very short and sweet and so dicriptive. great background choice as well.


  • rindomai
    October 25, 2005
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    *gasp!* WOW!! I LOVE it! first off, flamenco is amazing. second off, anyone that can write about dancing and honestly do it some justice has some talent. and third off... that picture is great your rhyming worked wonderfully, it was short and sweet and all in all, you simply depicted a traditional dance. always a plus


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    October 25, 2005
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    Oh this is so pretty suseann. I love to dance however I never ever get the chance to. It's not nearly as much fun to do alone Put on your dancing shoes girl, this is great!
    ~Lyrical
    Edited on Oct 25, 9:35 p.m. because ''.

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