She's the object of your desires
She's your maggot-raped mistress
She's your skin-rotten beauty
Worship the dead roses that lay at her feet
^*Decaying red flesh*~
/tastes so fresh/
^*Fragile organ, pumps green ooze*^
/it feels de-lic-ious-ly smooth/
^*Scent of the dead, dance of the living*^
/so sensual, yet so giving/
^*She'll be your lover, she'll be your whore*^
/take the chance and knock on Sin's door/
She's the object of your desires
She's your maggot-raped mistress
She's your skin-rotten beauty
Worship the dead roses that lay at her feet
Try as you might, you cannot break her...
~heart~
In Death's embrace it was tragically torn...
~apart~
Author notes
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Written October 25th, 2005
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o.o Really vivid imagery in this. Totally blew my mind >_> I wasn't expecting it to seem so real to me, but it did and that's a good thing. This is really nicely written and laid out. I really enjoyed reading this dark, morbid piece. Keep up the good work.
Love always,
Kristen -
Hey there.
Well, it's been a while since I last logged on, and this is the poem that greets me. Totally awesome! I can't find anything to tell you to improve on. It's awesome and <3 I love it. ^-^
BT -
hahaha!!! This is great...dark and gory and funny at the same time! I love it! Isn't necrophilia great stuff?!?!? LOL!
You crack me up...and scare me a little....lol
just kidding!
Keep up the great work!
Lorena -
awesome
What an amazing piece Alyssa! If I may, what was the insperation for this piece? I mean this is brilliant!
Yet another amazing piece by my best friend.
~sami -
wow, this is quite awesome....very deep dark and emotional, great write, keep it up
it's quite....um....interesting...ya, especially the part abt the organs and the ooze....yumm
janie
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^^;;; Yeah. It is. Glad you like it.
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Oh my fucking squab, Alyssa!! This is such great work! I love it!! How did you think of this?! This was the pome you were talking about when we got on the bus right?
~*Tk
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