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The Beast

Oblivion consumes her mind
taking her soul to new levels of pain
as paralyzing torture is bestowed upon her

Spitting her heart out
he slices at her pale skin
his sharp nails causing the sharp sting

He picks up the bleeding body
and carries it to the cold lake
dumping it for a poor child to find

But before turning to leave
The beast speaks to the floating body one last time
"My child, thank you; depression has finally won."

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Written October 25th, 2005

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