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I hate you mom

Looking back on today,
nothing happened.
Looking back on what I've done,
I know I've done some wrong.
But you need to fucking chill,
I think your becoming mentally ill.
You're completely going crazy,
You cant blame me,
I'm only trying to have fun.
I know what I've done and I'm not as trashy as you think.
I'm sorry,
well, not really,
but I wish you were dead,
you suck at parenting me,
you need to understand...
Why cant you get this through your thick head?
you'll never let me just be free.
I dont get you,
I wish you only knew,
you're tearing us apart.
You obviously fucking dont get it,
but your breaking my heart.
your such a fucking bitch,
I wish I could die,
just flip a fucking switch, and be dead, just like that...
But before I die, I just want you to know...
I Fucking HATE YOU MOM

Author notes

yea i do amit i do screw up but my mom takes it to serious so this what this whole poem is about
Written October 25th, 2005

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  • Uncle
    October 31, 2005
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    Sounds like the real thing. You go off the charts with your emotions. And seems like your mother does to. What does that mean?

  • snukums
    October 26, 2005
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    I can realy relate 2 this poem! very well written! i have written a similar poem caled dear mother if u want 2 read it! well donr again!
    liz x


  • Fading Illusionist
    October 26, 2005
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    I agree with Freak, lots of times people do stuff and they think their parents are over reacting. When really theyre just worried about them and do what they think is right. I dont know what happened of course, but if you care to share at any time in the future, just let me know!

  • Freak-on-a-leash-
    October 25, 2005
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    very deep

    you admit it yourself youve done something wrong, but im sure ur mom just cares about you and is worried, im no1 to judge, as i dont know the whole situation tho, but try to give your mom a chance, its very traumatic to lose a parent this way, or even worse the other way round and trust me i know, but it all depends on whos fault it is, or wether you just dont get along. i hate my dad but its cs we just dont get along, no one has really done anything wrong, but hmmm well leave it with that shall we... just try and talk 2 her... good luck
    xx