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Happy Birth Day Patty

HAPPY  BIRTH  DAY

Now your as old as
dirt too,

So how do you feel
now that your 52?

I love you no matter
your age your one heck
of a gal pal

So all I want for you
is on this day of yours
that you feel all safe
and well,

Happy happy birth day
to you from me.
              Doris .

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Written October 25th, 2005

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  • fourth coming
    October 29, 2005
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    Love your poem Sis Patty


  • Your Hine Us
    October 28, 2005
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    Thanks so much for your comment Tammy,your right your mom is a great gal-pal and she is one of mine,love ya kiddo .aunt Doris.

  • Your Hine Us
    October 28, 2005
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    Thanks Cindy for your nice comment,its always nice when someone else is as old as I am,its hard to think Patty and I are 52 this year and getting older,love ya even tho'e you are a few years older then me hahahahahahah .Doris.
    Edited on Oct 28, 5:54 p.m. because ''.


  • Your Hine Us
    October 28, 2005
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    No need to thank me its your big day not mine,just glad your as old as me heee haaa,love ya .


  • Dark-Princess
    October 26, 2005
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    This is so sweet and silly! I love it! I know mom will love it too! It is sweet and silly just like mom! Everyone needs a gal pal like her! Good luck in the contest!
    Dark-Princess


  • FifthDove
    October 26, 2005
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    Hey D
    This is a beautiful birthday poem for Patty.
    I can see from her comment that she loves it.
    As do I. Good job
    Ciindy


  • fourth coming
    October 26, 2005
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    Thank you Your hine us for your loving words and wishes lots of my love Patty

  • Your Hine Us
    October 25, 2005
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    Thanks allot Huntress,I really hope she likes it for she is a very good lady from her nose to her toes.and she is also a hoot to be around yes we all love her just as I know you do too .


  • Huntress silver member
    October 25, 2005
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    This is awesome, i know she will love it

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