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Simply Deep (Poetic Reading)

An interface
a walk from a place to a place
and everyday we come face to face
with a stranger
we run, in the boldface of the sun
we hide, in the high waves of the tide
we go, away from everyone else and we discover that we are hiding from ourselves
and we ask "who is going to solve the equation?
who is going to be the deity of the nation?
and who is going to kill the gun and strive,
and do the impossible something never done alive?
who is going to plant the money tree?
and eliminate all the poverty?

without eyes can we see?
without a mind can we even be?
and who is going to fill the eyes?
and who is going to fill the mind?
who is gonna search the mystery to find the individual is me?

The answer is Him, yes we need Him.
A thought in a mind, but the truth yet to keep
things that may seem complicated
may just be Simply Deep.

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Written October 25th, 2005

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  • honeybrown
    October 27, 2005
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    very interseting. i like the idea of this poem and the rhyme was great!
    thanks for entering
    ~Jenae