It was such a strange place
How did she end up there?
Cold, lonely, scared
Confinement
Uncertainty of how she arrived there
She roamed the halls
With all the gray walls
Frantically searching for the exit
Needing to escape
Needing fresh air
How come she was the only one there?
And how could she free herself?
A prison with no guards
A solitary inmate
Who lead her in?
Showed her to her cell
Left it open
She’s free to go
But go where?
There’s no exit, she searched everywhere
For eternity she walked those lonely halls
In search of freedom
And life’s truth’s
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Written October 25th, 2005
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ive had that feeling before i really admire your talent for being able to put it into words keep it up
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Sounds a little eerie but so realistic. So many of us are in this same position, trapped with no place to go, constantly searching for a way out but only running into walls. I hope you come back and post some more and show us some more of your talent.
Avril
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YAY YAY a new poem. I miss you so much!!! I hope you are doing great although this poem makes me think otherwise
this is so beautiful in a heartbreaking sort of way. If you need to talk you know where to find me 
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Beautiful, as always; though long time no see. I can relate to this poem, but i suppose we all can, can't we? One thing though; In search of freedom
And life’s truth’s. truths shouldn't be posessive, non?
missed you lots, babe. glad you're back.
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Sounds a lot like what I seem to be going through, dear. Lately I have imprisoned myself in this corridor of empty feelings and racing thoughts. Constantly searching for the secrets to truth, life, and happiness, I am feeling my way through darkness, with lies and desolation all around me. It is a very imaginative, vivid write--which I hope doesn't categorize how you have felt lately.
It has been a long time since I've seen anything from you. I hope that you have been well lately.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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