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Letting Go

Letting Go

Something tells me I should let go,
because common sense tells me so.
Close another heartfelt chapter in my so-called life,
abundant of pleasure, hope pain and strife.

What compels me to hold onto these shattered dreams
with ever-repeating painful scenes and themes.
Soothed by a sweet thought of how it used to be
I fear my friend; I must let your free...

In the end, I guess it wasn't meant to be,
Why did we not carry on,
slow like  how it started
why could I not resist
the opportunity of temptation

the ending...
of our relation...

Author notes

20:07 - 20:16 GMT +1 +1 DLS
23-09-2005, Train Amsterdam Central Station - Almelo
Written September 23rd, 2005

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  • StrandsInYourEyes
    November 7, 2005
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    aw Fil this was great .... glad to see you writing again. love it!
    xo
    Lori