Smile when in misery
And laugh when in pain.
Who cares if you hurt,
I don't care if you're insane.
Choke on your own goodness,
And bleed for your life.
Nobody needs you around,
Go on, pick up that knife.
Suffer for his ignorance,
That slams into your head
I hope he knocks you over,
I hope you end up dead.
You are an utter disgrace,
You put shame upon us
God I'm tired of you lying,
And causing such a fuss
Stop screaming in agony,
For your voice is unheard
You sick, depressed child,
Quit acting so absurd.
I hope you hurt yourself,
Don't come running back here
I can't be bothered with you
Tell someone that cares.
Don't you go off crying,
And purging up your tea
I can't bear to look at you,
- You aren't related to me!
You make me feel sick,
Just go, leave me alone
I didn't even want you,
This is not your home.
I don't love you.
I hate you.
Author notes
Option 5.
If this isn't suitable than just forget it 
But thanks for hosting an honourable contest.
-[It's about the things my mother has said to me over the years, you know the words that permanently stick in your head. Of course these are not her exact words but close enough.]
"Angel"
"Red Sox"
-Elegantly Wasted.
Written October 25th, 2005
A contest entry
- so many things to write!!! cmon check it out!! by tigerlily185.
300 points, ended October 29, 2005, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hey i know you feel when your mom says somethign hateful, my mom does it all the time, but i don't live with her, so really it's not that bad. There will always be some things that stick with us, bad or good, but i think the bad sticks the most just because it's so hateful. this is a good write. hey, remember things get better in time......clara.....
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I think many a time I stooped to my mothers level. Possibly because all I ever had against her were words - Pretty pointless but hey .. Thanks for commenting
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Fuck when I was first reading this I was thinking
" that's some hateful shit to wish on someone"
I am sorry it was wished and said to you....
My mother has said some hateful things as well
where in turn I stooped to her level and said hateful things back
Olivia -
I know sweetness. [hearts] I miss yoo like craaaazy.
EYE FLU.
-LcL's Forever-
Edited on Nov 02, 8:20 p.m. because ''. -
*Gets very angry* I know all this babygirl and it still makes me so mad *slams her fist on the table* GRRRR! Hey listen I'm here for you darl, if ya ever need to talk ...
~*~Steph~*~
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Thank yoo very much. & cheers for running such a great contest.
Love,
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This is good, i can feel your anger go through my body it gave me chills!!! i loved it so much, so well written, it just blew me away i think i am lost for words LOL! bravo!
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good job!!! i really loved this poem and that is why i am giving you first place!!! yay for you!!! great job!!!
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Thanks for commenting girl
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Kalah. -
Hey sweety! I'm sorry about your mom did that to ya! its really emtions and full of painful in the piece , really sad indeed. Very nice flowed , keep up the great work! and I wish win the contest!
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That really is such a good poem. Very emotional, but very well written. Although I'm very sorry for the circumstances that caused you to write it, it really is a great work!
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good luck in the contest, im sorry that anyone ever made you feel this way, especially your own mother. keep up the great writes
tasha -
great job and good luck.. Linda
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wow, this is a great poem, it rhymes very well
yay rhymes!!!
i love this poem, i hope you win
cuz u totally deserve that
it's very sad that your mom said that to you..hope she got over it
awesome write, keep it up and good luck in the contest
janie
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wow, that is very sad!! it is a perfect poem for this contest.. i am srry your mom did that to you... i really love the pem.... great job!!!!
~katie~
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