This year
All the things I've trusted you with
The secrets that were meant to be unheard
I told you knowing you wouldn't hurt me or let me down
Thinking maybe you'd understand
But see I didn't understand why I shouldn't have trusted you
And thanks, for now giving me one good reason to trust no one
You embarrassed me
With those secrets I shared
Now every ones asking for explanations
Explanations to what I am incapable to be giving
and in which I shouldn't have too
All because your...
A drunk.
Saying my secrets that hurt to hear
Using them against my behalf
Just to see me cry? Hurt? Feel the pain I tried to forget?
I told you, I trusted you
Isn't that what you wanted to hear
and you fucking broke it
What are you trying to do to me?
Prove no man nor woman is wroth trusting
and that I made one BIG mistake,
by bring down those walls.
To believe maybe this friend was worth it?
Betraying a best friend is like killing their spirit,
Because only a best friend would know all the right secrets
To ones heart
Author notes
to a once dear friend who is no longer trustworthy
Written October 25th, 2005
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended October 28, 2005, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow I really liked this. It flows so well and has so much emotion. And it has just given me a wonderful inspritation for a poem. Thanks
. It's always so hard when friends blab your secrets to the world. And I loved how you emphasized making a BIG mistake in this. Awesome job!Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Fi~
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WOW. I felt it. And I feel that I can relate. Trust is something that is hard to get and harder to give. Trusting a friend, a best friend, is something special. When they break that trust, it hurts more than others. It strikes home.
Great write here.
Good luck in the contest.
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