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Up, Up, And Away!

I'm still bullet-proof, I just can't fly anymore.

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Written October 24th, 2005

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  • Cat gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    hopefully both- i'm sure they are phases


  • horus8 gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    What? My skirt, or the mustache?


  • Cat gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    it's only temporary-
    i like the write.


  • Annastacia
    October 25, 2005
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    Don't feel bad about that, I love 10cc!!
    Anna


  • Mandy Pants
    October 25, 2005
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    superman? i love it, good luck!


  • catz Moderators member
    October 25, 2005
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    Lol.... what a way to go Knowing you did it, and now it's done

    Okay, Jeremi, that's the last straw....you're grounded!!!

    Good luck in the contest.. I like your entry best


    Dee


  • Keith
    October 25, 2005
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    I'm sure you'll fly in time. Good luck.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    rubber bullets!! ahhh 10cc what a band..

    I'm showing my age there.. lolololol
    good thoughts goin' on here..
    I like my lil' wings though


  • Queen of Cups
    October 25, 2005
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    lol


  • Pallas Athena
    October 25, 2005
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    Sounds like how I feel right now.. Although, the more bullets that hit, the less I feel secure.. I'd rather fly away from it all. Athena

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