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Random Thoughts...

what do i feel?
I don't know
What am i thinking?
I don't know
Empty and hollow
Is all i can sense
Blank pages turn in my head
Music without a sound is all i hear
all around
help me find out the real me
help me find out what i really seek
i don't know what I'm saying
just meaningless words out of my mouth
looking for some sense in this sea i drown
What do i feel?
I don't know
What am i thinking?
Help me....

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Written October 24th, 2005

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  • Little Miss Muffet
    April 7, 2006
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    This seems like one of those notebook pages, you know the ones you write because you're having a really bad day and just need to let it all out? And then you look back on it and think "wow, I wrote that?" It's good, I think I have an idea of how you felt...or feel.