learn to live
to love the forgotten
fight the future
and recall the past
except the pain
but leave the heart break behind
so what if so much is lost
so much will be found
the lost remembered
the new savored
all is one
and one is many
confusion becomes clear
when the truth is a lie
nothing is forgotten
but not all is remembered
betrayal is unknown
pain is forgiven
mistaking warnings for wisdom
from friends that where Demons
hate was up
when love was down
more became less
and full became empty
never an answer
just more questions
loving the world
when it only hates you back
support is nothing
but bending bars of withering faith
thoughts are deep
in a teenage mind
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Written October 24th, 2005
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You write very deep poems darkness. and so straight forward. I love it! Kepp doin what ya doin, G.
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this is a really good poem. you said what it feels like to be a teenager. -
Nice poem...You really captured your emotions really well, and this reminds me of how I felt not too long ago...
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this is really nice and this is what it is liek to be a teenager you portrayed it so poerfectly. i relly like this it shows great thought and emotion
grat write
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love it, love it, love it.
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i relly like this poem... it truly captures what t is like to be a tyeenager... all the feelings of hopelessness and regret... wishing you could move some where else so you could do whatever you want... anyways great write...
~me
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