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another wanna be,

She had brown hair
Down her back
Now it is blond,
Because of what seventeen said
She usta be a great size 5'6 120 lbs
Now She gotton thin,
103 pounds
She usta not were makeup,
on the count of her natural beauty
now she piles it on
think as plate
She only wants more everyday
What is wrong with Sucidy
Everyone wants to be like the girl out of seventeen
But they do not realize,
She is air-brushed,
She is fake
Another wanna be,
Another girl to lose her dream
On cause of 4 pounds
She looks at a photo of Jessica Simpson
She looks in the mirror
Take a good look at her face,
can't anyone see,
That her smile looks out of place,
Another wanna be

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Written October 24th, 2005

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  • candyecane2002
    October 25, 2005
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    AWE! JESSICA! This is soooooooooo awesome. I am only commenting because I need the point thingie so I can add more poems. I haven't talked to you in a while. Umm, call me sometimes or come to one of our games. talk to you later days chicka. xoxo shanz


  • slowlycrashing
    October 24, 2005
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    aww jessica this very good, almost cute but very good i love the last 2 lines very very good anyways great job i love you girly!