I wish i could just step out of this world
I wish i could let all my problems go
Let all my emotions wash over me
I would love to just stand back and watch the confusion and stress whirl around me
I need my own little world
Some far off magical place
Where i could lay in the middle of a big field and the only thing to think about is the flower tickling my ear
And the only noise is from the cool wind
Away from all the late night tears and drenched pillows
So now I'm off to a place where i wont live in fear
Away from the fear of screwing my whole family up
I'm off to my magical kingdom where there's never a change in season
Never an angry night
There's never a single argument
Somewhere where i can live in peace
In my own fairytale place
Author notes
well......yeah.....ummmmm.............whatever......so much drama!!!!!.......i hate it!!............
Written October 24th, 2005
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awww caseyboo that was a good poem i loved it it kinda brought a tear to my eye i loved it
love ya bunches
chels -
prince thank you so much for your comment. I apprietiate your advice and i agree with you it is kinda a tounge twister. But at the time i couldnt think of any other way to say it. But i see what you mean. Im glad you liked this piece. hope to comment soon!
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~*CASEY*~ -
Aw. Sweetie that was sooo good...
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Casey, that was sad, but beautifully written! Even I have dreamed of such a place, but haven't found it yet. Wonder if it really exists. Anyhow, for the sake of an honest critique... I think the last two lines should be changed. Maybe I'm the only one who got tongue twisted there a little, but "somewhere where..." hmmmm? Maybe...
Someplace where I can live in peace
In my own fairytale land.
I like that much better, but leave it the way you want it!
It's your creation.
Prince
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B_E_A_U_T_I_F_U_L!! i luved it babe..very pretty!!..luv ya lots..and you never called me sunday!..*kisses*..ttyl
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