Kira sat on a ledge, watching the sun dip into the horizon, waiting. She tugged on the middle ring on her collar, kicking her feet to and fro. Her body exhibited a young woman; her actions spoke otherwise.
She snapped out of her daze, hearing a metallic click against the ring she'd tugged. She looked up into the icy eyes she'd fallen in love with and smiled brightly up at Sharazon, gingerly running her hand down the chain he'd attached. "I missed you," she whispered.
Sharazon smirked, running a hand through her silken tresses lovingly. "I missed you too, Poppet."
Author notes
If you would like an explanation, feel free to ask.
Written October 24th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Drabbles IV by Elrenia.
300 points, ended November 17, 2005, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Poppet has got to be one of the cutest nicknames EVAH. This was a really sweet short short. I love Kira and Zon.
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NO ONE will love them as much as MEEEE!
I've loved them for something like three years now!
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I've become ubsseehssed with Master/Pet. It's just so...wondefrful! <3 Thank you for your comment. I inspire you! What a wonderful thing! ♥
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AHAHAH.. Spread my Infekshawnnnn... o o;; ~ GIGGLE. ~ I like experimenting with funny ways to spell the most simplest of words. <3 ._. UHM.. Yeah. I love it, 'cause it's about Zon and Kira, and Master and Pet, and, and, and.. Bee-yew-tea-fool.
Best of luck.. AGAIN. ^ ^; Anddd.. Mm'hmm; I'mma' start doing drabbles.. 'Cause I can. <3 AND YOU INSPIRE ME. ♥
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Thank you.
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Aww! Kira and Zon are SO sweet together. Lovely read Rose.
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I always center my short short stories. I tend to like them best that way for some reason. Other than that, I'm glad you enjoyed it. If I think up anymore, I'll be sure to enter them. Good luck with judging.
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Very nicely done. Good detail and drawn out without sacrificing ideas. Great imagery. The only thing I can say is that it should be aligned on the side, as a story. Centering it gives it too much a poetic look. Otherwise, a very good read.
Thank you for entering and sharing.
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Yes, it is another master piece. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm also entranced by such things at the moment.
As for first time story writers...perhaps. When I was younger though, I used to go on and on with detail. Thank you for commenting.
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Poppet.. Ahh, beautiful. Is this another 'master' piece?
I feel so entranced by those stories. Also, I am intrigued by these drabbles, they are wonderful for those who are starting out in the world of story-writing. Therefore, they are wonderful for me. 
Your friend and admirer,
Kain
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