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Hand In Hand

Hand
 In hand
   We wander
 Along the paths
Of hope, trust, dignity, never parting

Love
 Holds on
   Simply, and
 Surely madness
Disappears, true feelings remain alone

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Mary-Jane 00:56 GMT 25/10/05
Written October 24th, 2005

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  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    April 8, 2006
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    Very pretty indeed! And a tetractys. Or, double tetractys actually. They're fun to do, because they end up being all philosophical and stuff.


  • richiesnana
    October 25, 2005
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    I love it- very good

    This is a very nice poem I really like it, a good write,
    Keep writing it is grate.
    Good luck
    Kisses; Sue


  • ordinary days
    October 24, 2005
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    I like this.. it captures the simplicity of love as well as its power to make us happy and self-assured. Nice write, and thanks for entering!