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One Master

Every breath I take,
you may not realize this,
but I take it for you

Every step I take in this dark world,
even though you may not notice,
your strength encourages those steps

And all of the determination I have?
I'm sure you could have guessed by now,
but it is solely based on giving you happiness

I care not what may happen to me,
as long as you don't suffer because of it,
I would gladly die for you at any moment

I long for nothing more in this world
than to see you smile, and feel your love
through your every gentle touch

My sole purpose is to serve you as your pet
and yet I feel as if I am so much more
that no one but you could possibly ever understand

I didn't realize nor did I see this before,
but I now understand your anger and your tears
I now know why you are so easily frustrated and paranoid

Above all else, you are afraid to lose me
because without me, you fear you may fall apart
and die inside all over again

You love me more than I could ever have hoped for
I am your most precious possession; yours alone
because you fear sharing me; that I'll make your mistakes

The reason for your anger, tears, frustration...fear
is because I am everything to you and I never saw this before
I couldn't see how much I meant to you; you hide it so well

If I had known before, I would have acted
I would have taken you in my arms and taken more care
to never disobey you because your rules were to vanquish fear

But now the mistakes have been made
I have seen your childish, selfish jealousy and fear
and I am still right by your side

Because, you see...without you, I am nothing
You are my most precious love; my strength
and in turn, you are my everything as well

You are everything I have ever wanted;
everything I never thought I could ever deserve,
and everything I have always needed

My wild soul in only tameable by yours
My body may only ever belong to you
You are my only Master

Anyone else who ever tries to control me
is scorned with vicious defiance
because I only have one Master

and that Master shall always be
none other than you
My first love

Author notes

So I've decided to enter a prewrite or two as well. I hope that's alright. I plan to enter one from the Master's point of view as well.

Ooooh...Inspired by Kira being Sharazon's pet.

Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty.

I like this in a way...but in another way, it's strange how it doesn't...read like a poem.

ANYway...yes. This...is Kira's...reflection? Understanding? Vow? Something to her Master. Whatever you want to call it, because I can't think of the right kind of word I want to use for it.
Written October 24th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 12

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    Awwwww!! First love is a crazy rollercoaster of ups and downs and everything in between. Probably the best and worst experience one has. Hmmph...too bad it hardly ever lasts in real life. *rolls eyes*

    Anyway, nicely conveyed and I love her conviction about only having one master. Twisted as it is, it's endearing as hell. Cheers!
  • I love this poem, I love your entire Master/Pet series. This poem especially though because it rings true to my Master and I. We thank you for showing everyone the softer side of S/

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    Well...he IS a whore...Lmfao....but he's not JUST cold and heartless...He's emotionally unstable and has lots and lots of insecurities. But we love him JUST the way he is. <3
    Edited on Oct 25, 1:15 p.m. because ''.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    October 25, 2005
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    Lmfaoooo... Okay.. AHAH.. ~ Gig.. Gle. ~ I love how everyone that KNOWS Zon.. thinks he's a whore and stuff. xD And that he's just cold and heartless.. AHAHA.. Makes me laugh on the inside.

    BUT YOU.. You know better.. ~ Drunken guesture. ~ YOUUUU.. Knowwww.. All there is! .. To know about Zon.. Just about. ._. Lmao. Yes. I'm hyper. <3 So, please forgive the randomness.

    I DID READ IT, THOUGHHHH. ~ Happy Jig. ~

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    Kira's too much like me to ever leave him, no matter if he was cruel or not. Thank you for commenting, lovely.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    This is so sweet and pretty! It's lovely to read and wonderful to know Kira's feelings for Zon despite that it seems to others that he is being cruel.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 24, 2005
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    Thank you, darling. I'm glad to distract you.

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    October 24, 2005
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    this was a fun read. I've been fighting a sore throat and congestion so it's nice to have my mind distracted for a while. keep up the great work
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