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Brown eyes unbridled

Dusty glance welded words

A thousand nights between lovers

Your burning touch fulfilled my heart

Hot laughter in rooms of darkness

Love's body shines immortally

Innumerable pearls speak bitter desire

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Written October 24th, 2005

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  • QueenT
    January 9, 2006
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    This was great, this was intense, you painted a really nice picture with words! I like it! Sorry I am not really good with commenting either lol. I never know what to say.

    But I will say thanks for the comment on "A gift" it was a hard one for me to write. I dont know if I will write anymore.


    xxx Your lovely daughter QueenT 000


  • Beautiful Nothing
    December 19, 2005
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    This one is my favorite. Good job!!! I'm not so good at leaving comments so sorry if i'm too vage. I will get better when i get to know you lol.
    Love,
    Auntie